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Eve Doesn't Live Here

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We're way past forgiveness now,
we left it behind somewhere around
bitterness and recriminations.

I never had high expectations.
You never had lofty ideals and
I may have been deluded, but
I knew you better than you think.
I know that you blame me and
expect that I blame you.

I blame you for everything,
I lay all this at your feet.
Nothing here is not your fault.
I offered you salvation,
and you perverted it
because you had lost your faith.

Saw a damning apple
where there was only
a hand to hold.

You couldn't kill my faith, though,
and I don't need you to feel sorry,
though a sorry for the mistaken
identity would have been nice.

I'm not Eve and I never wanted
to destroy you.

You did that all by yourself.
I'll get over it one day, 100%, I swear.

Sometimes, I just like to revisit the old pain because I'm so much more prolific when I'm miserable.

How masochistic.
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I understand being prolific when you're miserable. That's me, alright.

Love the "damning apple" passage and the Eve comparison. A skillful, beautiful use of symbolism. The ironic thing is that its so close to reality. I really believe that whoever wrote the Bible (or translated that passage as it is now), was afraid of or angry at women. And I think sometimes men really do love to blame women for their troubles and pain.

But here's to being miserably prolific :ahoy: ... Much love to you. What a beautiful thing to see you find truth... even if it's through pain.