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you taste like ashes on my tongue
but i am all out of ways to save you.
you're burning up in front of me and
you want me to burn too, my skin
blisters and curls like paper, yet i still
try to reach you, i can save you,
i know i can. you're crumbling to dust
but you want the flames, and all i
want is an apology for all the scars
that will never go away. all your
"i'm sorry"s are soot in my throat and
i am done trying to save you, it's
time i tried to save myself.
sprinkle dirt over your grave,
all ashes to ashes, and dust to dust,
but mostly it's just good riddance.
but i am all out of ways to save you.
you're burning up in front of me and
you want me to burn too, my skin
blisters and curls like paper, yet i still
try to reach you, i can save you,
i know i can. you're crumbling to dust
but you want the flames, and all i
want is an apology for all the scars
that will never go away. all your
"i'm sorry"s are soot in my throat and
i am done trying to save you, it's
time i tried to save myself.
sprinkle dirt over your grave,
all ashes to ashes, and dust to dust,
but mostly it's just good riddance.
Literature
Insomnia
When sleep, like life, eludes me .......
...... life giving sleep overcomes everyone but me ....
life sapping concienceness drains me ....
My crimson shadowy wraith wakens and fills the slumber with it's grip of dark thoughts ... my mind races my soul cringes .....
The beauty of life but a twinkle in the crushing darkness of dispair ...... a flicker of light, the glimpse of a smile, the warmth of a touch ...... but a trickle .. like a single tear ....
............. the cold bitter dark, unrelenting throbbing, deafening, mindnumbing soul destroying pain!
....... like Ten thousand times Ten black holes ripping through the subatomic fibre
Literature
Nightmares
My heart races, erratically, lacking a proper rhythm.
A rhythm that could only be rendered by another heartbeat.
My soul soars frantically, searching for yours in a forlorn prison.
I strive on, praying, yearning, not ready to accept defeat.
I gaze into your eyes, longing for some sign of affection
I see nothing, because you feel nothing towards me.
I gave you my heart, trusting you to not break it, and you denied my attention.
Look at me now! I'm dead inside! What else could I possibly be!?
Twisted nightmares from the most morose parts of my mind start to form
I imagine that I am in a hospital bed, waiting for you to say farewell
You couldn
Literature
Insomnia
She felt as though
4am was a kind of peace
The harsh light of day barely prickling
At a horizon not yet ready to give up the dark
And a soul can rest
Bathed in the blue light
Of a monitor upon which
The heart could spill, showing forth to apathetic eyes
Sleep eludes her at these times
Giving away nothing
Eyes frantically wide
In a futile effort to convince herself it’s all for something
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That went to a darker place than I had intended.
It needs another rewrite, but some feedback before then would be helpful!
What is your interpretation? Is the imagery vivid enough or could it be more intense? Is it clear what is happening?
(c) Jessica McGale
It needs another rewrite, but some feedback before then would be helpful!
What is your interpretation? Is the imagery vivid enough or could it be more intense? Is it clear what is happening?
(c) Jessica McGale
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I love this. Dark and bitter, but not like cheap baker's chocolate; like good quality 70% cacao. Hah.
I've been meaning to check out your gallery forever. I always check out the galleries of everyone who adds me to their watch, and if I enjoy what I see, I watch them back. And something tells me I'm missing a lot by not watching you.
I've been meaning to check out your gallery forever. I always check out the galleries of everyone who adds me to their watch, and if I enjoy what I see, I watch them back. And something tells me I'm missing a lot by not watching you.